Post by flowerpaw on Apr 12, 2009 11:37:53 GMT -6
Name;
Cometfire
Gender;
She/cat
Rank;
Deputy
Home;
AquaticClan
Age;
25/moons
Pelt;
Cometfire isn't the largest cat around, but she isn't the smallest either. Actually she has long legs and a long, slender body this covered in short, ice colored fur. But other than that everything about her is quite small. Her paws are small and so are her dish shaped ears. She has short whiskers, and a smallish nose. Her tail isn't short, but it starts out thick with fur and narrows twards the end, giving it a long cone-like shape. Cometfire has narrow, pointed shoulders that give her a noble appearance and longer, softer fur on her chest that fluffs up when she is angry or frustrated. The fur on her tail also stands up which makes her look much larger.
Eyes;
Cometfires' face is framed by soft silver hairs that are also scattered through the fur on her back, chest and the bottom of her paws giving the fur a ripple affect. The silver fur covers the backs of her small ears, frames her large light green eyes, and her soft pink nose.
Personalities;
A few words that sum up Cometfires' personality would be calm, reserved, and loyal. When she was younger she always got worked up and frustrated easily, and seemed short tempered or rude. But, later in her apprenticeship she found ways to stay calm. She began looking at her life in a different way, and realized that all the little things didn't matter and what had happened in the past couldn't be changed. She became much calmer, but it was more than that- she never became depressed, and she didn't even grieve when her mother died. Some cats muttered that she had become incapable of feeling pain or grief, and didn't care about others. Cometfire kept her beliefs, but began to pretend that she felt sad at times and shared others pain.
Other than her nonchalant personality, Cometfire is very kind and understanding. She doesn't mind helping others with their problems, loves talking, and telling stories. She also is a great hunter and fighter, and loves doing her warrior duties. She has never been ambitious and is happy with being a loyal warrior.
Features/specialties;
Family; mother; Ravensnow(dead), Father;Lakefur SibblingsFalconkit(dead), Venomlash
Other;
Cometfire was born in AquaticClan. Her mother was Ravensnow- a small white cat with blue eyes, and her father was Lakefur- a large, light brown tabby with dark green eyes. Cometfire was born with two brothers Falconkit- a light tabby, and Venomkit- a dark tabby with thick black stripes and a white chest and back foot. They grew up together and loved each other, even though they got on each others nerves.Cometfire
Gender;
She/cat
Rank;
Deputy
Home;
AquaticClan
Age;
25/moons
Pelt;
Cometfire isn't the largest cat around, but she isn't the smallest either. Actually she has long legs and a long, slender body this covered in short, ice colored fur. But other than that everything about her is quite small. Her paws are small and so are her dish shaped ears. She has short whiskers, and a smallish nose. Her tail isn't short, but it starts out thick with fur and narrows twards the end, giving it a long cone-like shape. Cometfire has narrow, pointed shoulders that give her a noble appearance and longer, softer fur on her chest that fluffs up when she is angry or frustrated. The fur on her tail also stands up which makes her look much larger.
Eyes;
Cometfires' face is framed by soft silver hairs that are also scattered through the fur on her back, chest and the bottom of her paws giving the fur a ripple affect. The silver fur covers the backs of her small ears, frames her large light green eyes, and her soft pink nose.
Personalities;
A few words that sum up Cometfires' personality would be calm, reserved, and loyal. When she was younger she always got worked up and frustrated easily, and seemed short tempered or rude. But, later in her apprenticeship she found ways to stay calm. She began looking at her life in a different way, and realized that all the little things didn't matter and what had happened in the past couldn't be changed. She became much calmer, but it was more than that- she never became depressed, and she didn't even grieve when her mother died. Some cats muttered that she had become incapable of feeling pain or grief, and didn't care about others. Cometfire kept her beliefs, but began to pretend that she felt sad at times and shared others pain.
Other than her nonchalant personality, Cometfire is very kind and understanding. She doesn't mind helping others with their problems, loves talking, and telling stories. She also is a great hunter and fighter, and loves doing her warrior duties. She has never been ambitious and is happy with being a loyal warrior.
Features/specialties;
Family; mother; Ravensnow(dead), Father;Lakefur SibblingsFalconkit(dead), Venomlash
Other;
Sadly, early in their apprenticeship, Falconpaw was killed when his patrol was attacked by two foxes. The whole family was devastated. That was when Cometpaw began to grow hard when it came to grief, there was nothing she could do to bring her brother back and she had to live with it- because if she didn't she would bring more pain to her family. So she pretended not to care, she pretended that none of that mattered to her, and eventually she wasn't pretending any more.
About a moon before she and Venompaw were going to become warriors Ravensnow died of greencough. Lakefur was very depressed and didn't even show up to Cometpaw and Venompaws' warrior ceremony. He rarely left the warriors den and so all Cometpaw had left was her brother. They grew very close and got their warrior names of Cometfire and Venomslash.
Lakefur moved to the elders den early because he refused to do anything but lie in his nest and grieve. Cometfire loved her new title of warrior and always tries her best. She has some friends but still has the strongest bond with her brother Venomslash.
